[Report This]Date: 05/02/2012 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 1
Beautiful, painful, and poignant. Your characterization of Mark here comes closest to how I see him and reminds me of why, long before I was a Condorphile, I had a crush on the Eagle. My only complaint is that there isn't more ... when are those other pieces coming?
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I said I was slow. ;) I dust the other parts off and then get stuck. Then work and kids get in the way. I keep at it though. So someday.
[Report This]Date: 11/12/2008 12:43 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow, this is a very powerful piece. I can't wait for more.
[Report This]Date: 11/08/2008 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 1
Very interesing Story....Cannot wait for more....Keep up the good work and please bring the next instalment to this story very very soon...Gets an A+++ from me..
[Report This]Date: 11/08/2008 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is good. I like delving into Mark and Anderson's relationship more thoroughly. I'm looking forward to the next part.