Reviews For Midnight
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Reviewer: Becky Rock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/03/2019 8:18 PM Title: Midnight

Your description is very vivid. I was still wodering clear to the end if they were really birds or not.

Reviewer: Becky Rock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/02/2009 8:09 PM Title: Midnight

This was different. Interesting visualizations. I liked it.

Reviewer: ghost owl Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 02/18/2009 9:05 PM Title: Midnight

Nice to see you writing again after quite a break, Sal. A very dark, moody piece with the off-kilter ambience skilfully established using a rather minimalistic style. The one jarring thing was the phrase, "fear and despise." In the context of the sentence where you used it, it doesn't work or make sense. Perhaps you were looking for "fear and contempt" or "fear and derision"?

The narrative voice was brilliantly creepy. The story was very well executed overall with great pacing. Nicely done.

Reviewer: Nephedra Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 02/17/2009 11:43 PM Title: Midnight

wow! This very powerful and a bit creepy at the same time! There are times when the Condor close to being just like this in the fray. Well done!

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