Date: 02/13/2010 1:00 PM Title: Still dark ... still stormy
I can't believe I didn't review this back when I first read it.
An intgriguing beginning. Something unexpected. The team couldn't always be perfect and you've shown that in a realistic way.
Author's Response: Thanks, Becky. I really should go back sometime and re-write Uppercut. I think this piece is probably the best part of it.