Date: 11/14/2013 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 1
Lyssa, I really loved this. The interaction you have between Dylan and Kallan is so right for them. Having Kallan talk to Princess about being a young woman was very touching. The part that Jesse might 'make a woman of her' is an interesting possibility. Hope Mark wakes up.
Author's Response: Thanks for the encouraging words. I wondered if there might have been a little to much TB2086 history even if it was to highlight the predicament of our Eagle and Swan. The next part is called "mating for life" which Google informs me both Eagles and Swans do - interesting premise!
Date: 11/14/2013 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 1
It's everything you promised and more. I know jesse and prin have the age thing against them but i think the attraction between prin and jesse should kick our lovable but cluess eagle in his behind! What will mark think when he sees them having a good time watching old movies laughing and having a good time? Then prin taking jesse out to see how the world has changed and mark thinking its more than what it really is. You know dinner, jesse hanging out at the "j". I think you should have keyop really like jesse and have him dig at mark a little about how much time they are spending together. Do eagles have any green in them? Maybe ours will have that jealous green tint? Keep it comin girl!
Author's Response: Thanks, More to come soon.