Reviews For The Red Impulse Chronicles -- Ab Initio
Reviewer: cathrl Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/09/2013 7:39 AM Title: Chapter 2 -- The Outcomes
Date: 06/09/2013 7:39 AM Title: Chapter 2 -- The Outcomes
Oooh, I like this! Great writing technically, a lot of creepy uncertainty, and I especially like that you haven't made RI into a cuddly nice guy.
Reviewer: Candi Gomez Signed 
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Date: 06/02/2013 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 1 -- The Meetings
[Report This]Date: 06/02/2013 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 1 -- The Meetings
Awesome work! I love the sneakiness.
Reviewer: UnpublishedWriter Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/01/2013 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 2 -- The Outcomes
Date: 06/01/2013 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 2 -- The Outcomes
Good. And does this fit in with your other stories about Kentaro and Nambu?
Heh. Katse has the hots for Kentaro Washio. Adds more to the conflict.
Reviewer: Chris White Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/28/2013 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 2 -- The Outcomes
[Report This]Date: 05/28/2013 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 2 -- The Outcomes
Ooooh a great lead. I love the way you write RI with all of the hard choices he has to face, and give him some humanity (along with keeping his hardass nature, heh).