Reviews For The Red Impulse Chronicles -- Ab Initio
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Reviewer: cathrl Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/09/2013 7:39 AM Title: Chapter 2 -- The Outcomes

Oooh, I like this! Great writing technically, a lot of creepy uncertainty, and I especially like that you haven't made RI into a cuddly nice guy.

Reviewer: Candi Gomez Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/02/2013 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 1 -- The Meetings

Awesome work! I love the sneakiness.

Reviewer: UnpublishedWriter Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/01/2013 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 2 -- The Outcomes

Good. And does this fit in with your other stories about Kentaro and Nambu?

Heh. Katse has the hots for Kentaro Washio. Adds more to the conflict.

Reviewer: Chris White Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/28/2013 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 2 -- The Outcomes

Ooooh a great lead. I love the way you write RI with all of the hard choices he has to face, and give him some humanity (along with keeping his hardass nature, heh).

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