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Reviewer: Jennieb Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2015 9:01 AM Title: Chapter 1

Lyssa, glad to see you back to this story. I re-read the whole thing again. (:  I can't wait to see how things are going on with Princess.

Reviewer: rebe Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/28/2015 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 7

espero que sea pronto lacontinuacion esta muy interesante mas  el hecho de que sucedera  en su regreso ala realidad como reaccionaran los cuatro en este repentino cambio  de  vida  


Reviewer: Chris White Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 11/02/2013 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 7

This is coming along nicely. I like how you've worked in the backstory for Sam's world. Now poor Princess has to somehow contain herself and I wonder what Sam will do to poor inexperienced Mark. :) (If he IS inexperienced in your world.)

Author's Response: I'm not sure how many chapters will be left. Getting back to this story slowly.

Reviewer: vaniahepskins Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2013 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 1

im reading and im enyoying so much, so please keep writing, sorry i cant say anymore because english is not my first language... :)

Author's Response: Thank you for the words of praise.  THere is a lot more to come.

Reviewer: KT1972 Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 07/03/2013 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 5

Very interesting..... I like the novel way you're getting the Eagle and Swan together ;) I'm wondering now if it will continue after the two swans have returned to their rightful dimensions...

Author's Response: There's going to be some fire works before the Swan's return to their reality.  They won't be the only one's affected by the fall out.  Stay tune, this is going to get a little messy in the next few chapters.

Reviewer: Jennieb Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2013 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 3

i think u should go with the 1st option. i look forward to see what comes along! ps... put some adult situations anyway! :-)


Author's Response:

I took your advice and went with situation one.  The adult content is comming ;0

Reviewer: Chris White Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2013 8:07 AM Title: Chapter 3

Hmm there's lots of ways you can go. As I like having reading material and this is interesting *grin* I vote for 1 or 2. Though there would be some amusement in just being dropped in with 3 to Princess having to face a shell-shocked Mark  when she got home.  :)

If it were me I'd probably try 1 and fall back to 2 if it just didn't work. I'm noodling over some ideas for this challenge. It wolud be very entertaining to do a world switch between BOTP and Raven. 

Author's Response: Thanks for the ideas - shell shocked Mark - that comming.  Best of luck on your own story.

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