[Report This]Date: 11/13/2012 9:15 AM Title: Chapter 1
I hope Spectra is truly out of the picture. Can you imagine the sports training schools they might run after this? Taken from your parents as soon as you show talent and sent to battle G-Force as part of your gymnastics training.
Author's Response: Yes, for Keyop's sake especially, let's hope Zoltar is out of the picture. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 09/20/2012 7:36 AM Title: Chapter 1
How did I miss this? Loved it. And I agree, the whole "if you're chasing me, the real guy's being left in peace" line is probably the best redirection there is.
But...no implant, and coming out, and doing something that public, and he's made a lot of enemies...
Author's Response: Excellent point, cath! I should have thought of that & addressed it in the story. Hmm ... this one might require a follow-up. For now, maybe Jason's tagging along for reasons other than just choreography ... ;)
[Report This]Date: 07/29/2012 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 1
Very sweet, Julie! ! Nice to see Keyop in the limelight, and the interaction between Keyop and Jason. And poor Anderson - it's strange to see the team without him.
Author's Response: Daniella, I know! That part was hard to write, but it seemed to fit the story. Glad you liked the piece!
[Report This]Date: 07/27/2012 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love it! I like how you have the team turn the media away from them to concentrate on Keyop.
Author's Response: Thanks, Becky. I like to think that if they survive the war, they'd finally get a taste of normal life.