Reviews For Cavy Diplomacy
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Reviewer: UnpublishedWriter Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/24/2012 1:50 PM Title: Chapter 1

Porcellus? Really?

Cutleri? When do we meet Dinnawaer?

Yes, a cute story. (I used to own guinea pigs. They are cute, and make adorable little noises.)

Reviewer: TransmuteJun Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/18/2012 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 1


Why am I picturing that Disney G-Force movie???? 

Author's Response: No idea. No idea whatsoever....

Reviewer: Daniella T Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/11/2012 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 1

I hope the younger readers don't miss the moral of the story: Females always mature faster than males.

I loved it, EW! Cavies reminded me of ewoks a bit -- cuddly and huggly.

There's only one thing to add: Meep!

Author's Response: LOL! It's hard not to add "...and sometimes the males NEVER mature"! Anyway, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: jublke Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 07/07/2012 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 1

I love stories where the aliens seem truly alien, and you've done a wonderful job here.  I only wish there was more!

Author's Response: I'm happy I tickled your fancy with this. Hopefully inspiration will strike...

Reviewer: Becky Rock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2012 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 1

EE I love this!. I do hope there is more. The cavies soud so cute. Good thing Jason didn't dispose of the Spectran troublemaker in front of everyone.

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it! I don't have any immediate plans for more, but who knows? More could come later on...

Reviewer: Clouddancer Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2012 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 1

A very cute sotry and one definitely good for a younger audience - one who does not need to have love and mariages explained to them.  ;)

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Chris White Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2012 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 1

Yup, it deserves a song, though! *sings* "Guinea pig loooooove!"

Author's Response: *groan*

Reviewer: Chris White Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2012 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 1

Not to mention explaining guinea pig love ... :)

Author's Response: Oh dear...I think we've said enough there! ;)

Reviewer: Chris White Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2012 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 1

I could totally visualize the cavies. :) And it's always nice when Keyop's vocal tics become a strength. Mark should be very relieved you decided not to marry him off!

Author's Response: I thought Keyop had it coming. And as for Mark...well, the marriage might have looked impressive on paper at first (marrying into an ambassador's family), I figured there were just too many awkward bits to explain ("We got engaged when she was two weeks old!") And, of course, Princess probably wouldn't have been too thrilled...

Reviewer: KT1972 Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2012 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 1

Awww, what a cute story, I really enjoyed it and yes, I agree there should be some for younger readers!
About time we saw Keyop being shown a bit of respect too, that's something we don't see too often.

Author's Response: Glad you liked it! It's a shame more opportunities aren't given for the little guy to shine -- he does fight at the same level as his teammates, after all!

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