Reviews For "A Critical Moment for the Science Ninja Team" A rewrite.
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Reviewer: TransmuteJun Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2011 10:28 AM Title: Chapter 5 : Every parents nightmare.

I love he way you're focusing on Nambu's concern over Joe's injury, and what he is going through as he sees one of his children suffering. You've really painted a full character profile of the doctor right here in chapter 5!

Author's Response: Thanks TJ. I'm glad you are enjoying this.

Reviewer: Becky Rock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/18/2011 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 5 : Every parents nightmare.

This is getting better and better. It's well written and I love reading the connection between Joe and Nambu.

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