Date: 04/13/2014 5:43 PM Title: Cooling Off
I think I need to borrow that hose myself after reading this! :P
I really enjoyed this Amethyst. I can see it all in my head; Jason enjoying a morning at the track, the sky a hazy backdrop, checking over the car before and afterward.
'Oh, my, was he wearing underwear?' she wondered. Heheh.:P
'Looking up, Jason noticed her intense observation and a devilish grin graced his face. Before she had time to react, he turned the hose on her and she screamed as he shot water at her'.-- Yep now she can't yell at him for heading into Jill's soaked to the skin, 'cause she is too! :)
Date: 04/05/2010 1:52 PM Title: Cooling Off
I know which picture you are talking about. I love how you brought it to life and gave it some depth. Beautiful writing Amythyst.
Author's Response: Thank you, CD! It was an enjoyable piece to write, I just had to keep looking at that picture. ;)
Date: 04/03/2010 2:37 PM Title: Cooling Off
You've brought the pic to life brilliantly, Amy! And I so liked how Princess could see Jason in another way ... and such a way! I wonder if anyone could think otherwise when seeing such a vision!
Author's Response: Thanks Marie! Glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 04/03/2010 12:01 AM Title: Cooling Off
Well done! Watching Jason, as he just does what he loves to do –drive and take car of his car- and then gives in to the sensual pleasure of cool water on a hot summer day, is… well hot! I can well believe Princess would be entranced, even though it’s all playful between them… (for now?)
Author's Response: Thanks lb! And we all know how play like that can lead to other sorts of play. ;)
Date: 04/02/2010 11:05 PM Title: Cooling Off
Oh, baby! After the imagery in this fic I need to cool down myself!
Knowing the picture, as I do *drool*, I think you have interpretated it beautifully and given it a wonderful back story... Great job!!
Author's Response: Thank you. Can you imagine having to continually refer back to the picture to write this fic? The best part of writing it.
Date: 04/02/2010 10:26 PM Title: Cooling Off
What a fabulous interpretation of an awesome image!! I was picturing it perfectly in my mind as I was reading this- you had such wonderful descriptions! Now, if only I could be in Princess' shoes...*swoon*
Author's Response: Don't we all wish that.
Date: 04/02/2010 5:17 PM Title: Cooling Off
You did a great job on this, and really made the picture come to life! And I love the way that Princess sees Jason through different eyes... ;-)
Author's Response: Thanks TJ! But it wouldn't have been as good without your input or Becky's.
Date: 04/02/2010 4:49 PM Title: Cooling Off
And don't I just know the picture that inspired this one!! Lovely work! I like how it makes Princess look at Jason in a more sexual way than she has before, and yet how in the end, both of them are just plain mischevous!
*goes off to drool over picture*
Author's Response: Thanks Maddy. TJ gets a lot of credit for that. She kept me rewriting until I got it right.