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Gatchaman Fiction Archive :: Nephedra
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Penname: Nephedra [Contact] Real name: Nephedra
Member Since: 05/19/2007
Membership status: Member
Bio:
I have been a fan of BOTP since I was a kid who would run off the bus everyday to get her afternoon fix. I loved the mecha (though I didn't know that word back then!), the battle scenes, the weapons, etc. But the thing that kept me coming back for more was the relationships. No other show on was like this.

I have started to write down all those stories that have piled up in my head for years. I hope to be sharing more of them here soon. I am always looking for feedback. How can I improve with out feedback? :D

I will beta read if I have time. I look for grammar and such, but also plot holes or things I think just don't make sense (or at least not to me). My knowledge base is mostly BOTP, but I will beta Gatch as well.
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Reviews by Nephedra
- Breakdown by cathrl - Rated: 13+ - - starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
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Summary: Deep space is very big, very empty - and not a good place for systems failure.
Categories: Battle of the Planets
Series: Cath's Battle AU
Chapters: 8 - Table of Contents
Characters: Jason, Keyop, Mark, Original Character, Princess, Tiny Harper, Zoltar
Genre: Drama
Story Warnings: Mild Adult Situations, Mild Language
Timeframe: Mid-Series
Universe: Alternate Universe, Mostly Canon
Word count: 23165 - Read Count: 13159 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 04/30/2007 - Published: 04/30/2007
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Reviewer: Nephedra Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/16/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

This is one of my favorites in the series. Why I have never written a review before is beyond me! I love the technical details. I love the introduction of new characters. I also love that I found a pdf to epub converter so I can read it again on my trip this week. No wifi on the plane. :) I can never get enough of this series.

- Wedding Bells by cathrl - Rated: 8+ - - starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 5]
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Summary: It's Mark and Princess's special day.
Categories: Battle of the Planets
Series: None
Chapters: 1 - Table of Contents
Characters: 7-Zark-7/1-Rover-1/Susan, Jason, Mark
Genre: Vignette
Story Warnings: Mild Language
Timeframe: Sequel
Universe: Canon
Word count: 917 - Read Count: 1741 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 05/14/2007 - Published: 05/14/2007
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Date: 10/14/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Wedding Bells

Though I have read this before, I decided to read it again when it popped up on the random story generator. I liked it as much now as I did in the past. In your intro you say it is not part of your current story arc. Perhaps at the time it was written that was so...and yet....I can see it fitting into the current story line you have going. However, honestly I do hope that Mark recovers and does not end up with a permanent disability....even if he does get his girl. Well done!

Summary:

Zoltar launches an insidious attack against the upper echelons of Galaxy Security.  Mark has to hold his team together, even though he feels as though he's falling apart, himself.

Co-authored with Mark Stalter and archived with permission.

This story forms part of the BotP: 2163 series. Click on the series link below to view the recommended reading order.


Categories: Battle of the Planets
Series: Battle of the Planets: 2163
Chapters: 9 - Table of Contents
Characters: 7-Zark-7/1-Rover-1/Susan, Chief Anderson, Colonel Cronus, Jason, Keyop, Mark, Original Character, Princess, Tiny Harper, Zoltar
Genre: Action/Adventure, Character Study, Drama
Story Warnings: Adult Situations, Death, Mild Language, Mild Violence
Timeframe: Sequel
Universe: Alternate Universe
Word count: 38951 - Read Count: 16807 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 05/24/2007 - Published: 05/14/2007
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Reviewer: Nephedra Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/29/2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Well I certainly think this story was worth the wait! I read this once before and decided to reread. It was dark and ominous at times, and yet hopeful. I liked the different POVs, making it possible to get into each character's head a bit in scenes that often overlapped. There was a good bit of humor in here as well. This line made me laugh for sure - maybe because I have little kids....
"The four year old in my subconscious is very much with me again as I shift my weight from foot to foot. I force myself to stop lest the Chief ask if I need to go to the bathroom."

Well done! Any more collaborations?

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. That was Mark's line about the inner four-year-old. He has such a great handle on G-1. Sadly, he appears to have dropped out of the fanfic writing scene so it doesn't look as though there will be any more collaborations in the foreseeable future. Hopefully he has moved on to bigger and better things with all that writing talent.

- Testimony by Katharine - Rated: 18+ - - starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 3]
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Summary: A member of G-Force has to deal with the regrets left from a terrible mission.
Categories: Gatchaman, Battle of the Planets
Series: The Disturbediverse
Chapters: 1 - Table of Contents
Characters: Ryu Nakanishi
Genre: Character Study, Drama
Story Warnings: Graphic Violence, Mature Content, Strong Language
Timeframe: Mid-Series
Universe: Alternate Universe
Word count: 2496 - Read Count: 2113 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 05/18/2007 - Published: 05/18/2007
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Date: 09/16/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is so graphic and feels so real. I imagine they all have a moment like this. Heck I know some real soldiers who have gone through it. Tense read but makes you think.

- Leaders Never Fail by jublke - Rated: Everyone - - starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
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Summary:

Set two years before G-Force's first mission, Spectra is just a bizarre theory postulated by Chief Anderson.  Mark is a "regular" teen trying to juggle the responsibilities of school with secretive training for a theoretical war with alien life.  Mark is bright and capable and used to taking care of himself.  So what happens when he starts to fail a subject at school?      


Categories: Battle of the Planets
Series: Feathered Hearts
Chapters: 3 - Table of Contents
Characters: Jason, Mark, Original Character, Princess
Genre: Angst, Character Study, General
Story Warnings: None
Timeframe: Prequel
Universe: Tenuously Canon
Word count: 2303 - Read Count: 4801 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 05/18/2007 - Published: 05/18/2007
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Reviewer: Nephedra Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/12/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is such a cute story. Mark's need to succeed is so clearly shown. I also like your choice of helper! Jason is so often portrayed as the slacker who probably did not do well at school. They all need some level of intelligence for the job they do. Maybe not all in the same areas, but just the same they all have to be pretty darn smart! Well done!

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it, Nephedra.  I think Jason would have a hard time being second in command if Mark didn't recognize Jason's superiority in a few areas.  Also, I think Mark might need to be knocked down a peg once in awhile to keep his ego in check!  But I agree, I think Mark is driven by a need to succeed -- at everything -- whereas I think Jason is more concerned with whatever interests him. 

- Invader by Katharine - Rated: Adult - - starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
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Summary: Someone is hunting down the team, starting with their loved ones before working its way up to them. Something none of them is prepared to fight.
Categories: Gatchaman, Battle of the Planets
Series: The Disturbediverse
Chapters: 3 - Table of Contents
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Horror, Tragedy
Story Warnings: Adult Situations, Explicit Material, Graphic Violence, Mature Content, Sexual Situations, Strong Language
Timeframe: Mid-Series
Universe: Alternate Universe
Word count: 32260 - Read Count: 1016 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 05/19/2007 - Published: 05/19/2007
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Reviewer: Nephedra Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/29/2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I can't beleive I have never left a review for this! I love this series. The characters are strong yet have clear weaknesses and emotional responses to things that occur to them and others around them. Other then the over use of "whipcorded" I have no issues. I think that stands out only because it it not often used in general. Nonetheless the description fits and I have no idea what I would use instead. :) hmmm....wonder if defiance is almost done. Keep up the great work!

- Defiance by Katharine - Rated: 18+ - - starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 28]
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Summary: Jay makes his final stand as his cerebonic implants begin to fail and Gallactor launches a catastrophic offensive. 
Categories: Gatchaman, Battle of the Planets
Series: The Disturbediverse
Chapters: 16 - Table of Contents
Characters: Chief Anderson, Devil Star/Galaxy Girl, Dr. Kozaburou Nambu, Jason, Jinpei, Joe Asakura, Jun, Ken Washio, Keyop, Mark, Princess, Ryu Nakanishi, Tiny Harper
Genre: Character Study, Drama, Epic
Story Warnings: Explicit Material, Graphic Violence, Mature Content, Strong Language
Timeframe: Mid-Series
Universe: Alternate Universe
Word count: 107832 - Read Count: 44717 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 11/20/2012 - Published: 05/19/2007
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Date: 09/24/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Running on Empty

WOW! This was an amazing story! The technical stuff is extremely well written to be completely believable. The actions and feelings of the charatcers were very very real. No character seemed out of place or misrepresented....even Key as a medic. I actually liked that.

When oh when will we see the end? ...Please.... :)

Reviewer: Nephedra Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/12/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Running on Empty

hhmmm perhaps some light at the end of the tunnel. Love this story, but truly the suspense is killing me. :D

Well done as usual.

Reviewer: Nephedra Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/21/2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Running on Empty

wow and wow and Awesome! You still left a cliff hanger darn you! :P But some resolution nonetheless. I like the intensity of the writing, the descriptions and the military universe you set up. Please keep writing these.

Summary: A rewrite of the episode of the same name.
Categories: Battle of the Planets
Series: Cath's Battle AU
Chapters: 1 - Table of Contents
Characters: Chief Anderson, Jason, Keyop, Mark, Princess, Tiny Harper
Genre: Drama
Story Warnings: Mild Language
Timeframe: Episode Rewrite
Universe: Alternate Universe, Mostly Canon
Challenges: Rewrite a silly episode to make more sense
Word count: 7767 - Read Count: 2168 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 05/20/2007 - Published: 05/20/2007
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Date: 11/29/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Magnetic Attraction

I read this a long time ago that I felt I needed to read it again. I liked it as much or more the second time around! This episode is certainly lacking in explainations of many behavioral motivations. So many folks seem taken to extreme in this episode for no good reason. You add this depth effortlessly. The episode makes much more sense in this context. Well done!

- Matti's Tale by cathrl - Rated: 8+ - - starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
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Summary: The commander of ISO Security Team 7 thinks he's discovered an internal security problem, and ends up learning a lot more than he bargained for.
Categories: Battle of the Planets
Series: Cath's Battle AU
Chapters: 1 - Table of Contents
Characters: Chief Anderson, Jason, Mark, Original Character
Genre: Vignette
Story Warnings: Mild Language
Timeframe: Mid-Series
Universe: Alternate Universe, Tenuously Canon
Word count: 3433 - Read Count: 2067 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 05/24/2007 - Published: 05/24/2007
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Date: 05/14/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Bored at work so I thought I would read this again for what the 3rd time? Love it still. Then noticed that you had no reviews for it! Unbelievable! I really like all the new characters you have created in your universe. They each stand on their own and are totally believable. I like Nykinnen and it makes sense that he would figure it out. Well done as usual Cath!

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Summary:
Categories: Orphan
Series: Feathered Hearts
Chapters: 0 - Table of Contents
Characters: None
Genre: None
Story Warnings: None
Timeframe: None
Universe: None
Word count: 0 - Read Count: 0 - Completed: No
Updated: 12/31/1969 - Published: 12/31/1969
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Reviewer: Nephedra Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/14/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I loved this story. You really developed Tiny nicely. Nice to see his personality explored. Well done!

- Cat's Eye by Pintail - Rated: Adult - - starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
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Summary:

Mark and Princess struggle to define their relationship while Zoltar launches a sinister new plot to destroy the Earth. Oh, and silent feline observes both sides of the same story. [Follows Isolation in time line]


Categories: Battle of the Planets
Series: BotP Stories
Chapters: 5 - Table of Contents
Characters: Mark, Princess, Zoltar
Genre: Angst, Drama, Romance
Story Warnings: Adult Situations, Explicit Material, Sexual Situations
Timeframe: Mid-Series
Universe: Mostly Canon
Word count: 13073 - Read Count: 1407 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 05/25/2007 - Published: 05/25/2007
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Date: 04/16/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I can not even tell you how many times I have read this story! The first time was a long while ago when you had it up on your own website. I loved it then and I loved it now. I should have writtena a review for this long ago! The attention to detail is great and the use of the cat as a go between of sorts between our favorite heros and villians is a neat idea. It doesn't interfere with the story you are trying to tell in anyway. I like the conflict between Princess and Mark, and especially liked seeing the softer side of Zoltar. He is one interesting guy. Thanks for sharing!

- SACRIFICE by Becky Rock - Rated: 13+ - - starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 13]
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Summary:

Like many others, I didn't care for the ending of the Top Cow BotP comic, which implied Jason had defected to Spectra.  This is my version of what happened.

This story begins when Mark realizes Jason isn’t aboard the Phoenix.


Categories: Battle of the Planets
Series: Sacrifice
Chapters: 19 - Table of Contents
Characters: None
Genre: Angst
Story Warnings: Adult Situations
Timeframe: Other
Universe: Alternate Universe
Word count: 47439 - Read Count: 30332 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 05/01/2010 - Published: 07/02/2007
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Reviewer: Nephedra Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/15/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Yeah! More, more, more!

I like where it is going so far.

Author's Response: Hi Nephedra. I'm glad you're enjoying it. I just got the beta read back on the next chapter and have to make some fixes before posting.

Reviewer: Nephedra Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/03/2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

yippee! I like the end with no end....like all episodes the bad guys get away, true to form yet mostly satisfying due to the level of destruction. Nice job overall - this was a great story and worth the wait!

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it Nephedra.

Summary: Ken goes out on his normal mail run and finds himself in an unusual storm...When gets back to his Shack later that day everything has changed...

Illustrated, by Springie.

 Story extract;

He tried to push through the crowd of drunken men, almost nearly punching one that who made a comment about her spending a night with him.

He finally made it to the front as the stage lights flashed as she hooked her left leg around the pole and leaned back with her eyes closed and took off the sexy red satin bra right in front of him, only inches from his face.
Categories: Gatchaman
Series: None
Chapters: 33 - Table of Contents
Characters: Berg Katse, Devil Star/Galaxy Girl, Dr. Kozaburou Nambu, Egobossler, Gel Sadra, Jinpei, Joe Asakura, Jun, Ken Washio, Original Character, Sosai X
Genre: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, Romance, Tragedy
Story Warnings: Adult Situations, Death, Erotica, Mature Content, Mild Adult Situations, Sexual Situations
Timeframe: Mid-Series, Time Travel
Universe: Alternate Universe, Tenuously Canon
Word count: 103796 - Read Count: 51532 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 02/21/2008 - Published: 09/06/2007
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Reviewer: Nephedra Signed
Date: 01/30/2008 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26- Jasmin Aichi.

Overall I am enjoying this story and all the twists and turns. I am curious to know how it ends and how you deal with Ken and Jun with resepct to their past and future. It is a tangled web you weave my dear!

There are a lot of typos in there in all the chapters that seem to be the byproduct of the spell checker run amuck. (i.e. fiord when I think you mean forehead? as just one example I saw repeatedly)

Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Thanks for your comments...I try to fix errors if I find them, even after posting. My spell check keeps changing for Aust to US which I try to catch. (it's very annoying)but thanks for reading anyway :)

- Blood Line by Becky Rock - Rated: 13+ - - starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
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Summary: This is the beginning of the Blood Line series.  Jason is attending college in St Louis and finds the coming war with Spectra isn't the only thing he has to worry about.
Categories: Battle of the Planets
Series: Blood Line
Chapters: 26 - Table of Contents
Characters: Chief Anderson, Colonel Cronus, Don Wade, Jason, Keyop, Mark, Original Character, Other Crossover Character, Princess, Tiny Harper
Genre: Action/Adventure, Angst
Story Warnings: Adult Situations, Mild Language, Mild Sexual References, Violence
Timeframe: Prequel
Universe: Alternate Universe, Cross-Over
Word count: 73974 - Read Count: 31789 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 01/24/2008 - Published: 12/27/2007
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Date: 01/31/2008 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

The first few chapters were hard for me at first as it was difficult to get into the whole vampire/werewolf scene. Perseverance however was worth it! I really am enjoying this story and looking forward to more.

I see you posted the follow on already! Aack! This one seems unfinshed yet so I hesitate to start reading it, but....so curious.

Author's Response: Hi Nephedra!  Spirit of the Mountain takes up where Blood Line left off.  I originally planned the story to be a never ending soap opera, but it started getting too big.  No Laughing Matter, which I started posting in the Yahoo Group, is the next story and takes place a few months later. 

- The Present by Madilayn - Rated: 18+ - - starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Table of Contents
Summary: It's Princess' 21st birthday. Jason decides to give her the gift she's always wanted.
Categories: Battle of the Planets
Series: None
Chapters: 1 - Table of Contents
Characters: Chief Anderson, Jason, Keyop, Mark, Princess, Tiny Harper
Genre: Drama, Humor/Comedy
Story Warnings: Adult Situations, Sexual Dialogue, Sexual Situations
Timeframe: Mid-Series
Universe: Mostly Canon
Word count: 6126 - Read Count: 2285 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 01/24/2008 - Published: 01/24/2008
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Reviewer: Nephedra Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/19/2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Present

I don't know how I missed this one! I absolutely love your explanation for the obliviousness! Perfect! Well done as always!

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed this - and I'll forgive you for missing it!  :p   LOL

Summary: The newly appointed Commander of G-Force makes a decision
Categories: Battle of the Planets
Series: On My Watch
Chapters: 1 - Table of Contents
Characters: Mark
Genre: Drama, Vignette
Story Warnings: None
Timeframe: Mid-Series
Universe: Mostly Canon
Word count: 523 - Read Count: 1453 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 01/24/2008 - Published: 01/24/2008
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Date: 11/25/2008 Title: Chapter 1: On My Watch: Eagle

I really liked this. I like the AU you have set with Gatchaman crew as the precursor to the BOTP crew. Well done!

Summary: A reboot of the Gatch universe
Categories: Gatchaman
Series: None
Chapters: 1 - Table of Contents
Characters: Berg Katse, Dr. Kozaburou Nambu, Jinpei, Joe Asakura, Jun, Ken Washio, Original Character, Ryu Nakanishi, Sosai X
Genre: Action/Adventure, Mystery
Story Warnings: None
Timeframe: Other
Universe: Alternate Universe
Word count: 1278 - Read Count: 2119 - Completed: No
Updated: 01/24/2008 - Published: 01/24/2008
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Date: 02/01/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

WOW! I love the imagery! I cannot wait to see where you take this!

Summary: This immediately follows Blood Line.  The team has gone to destroy the Spectran base that birthed the Terrapin, but instead, Mark and Jason find themselves running for their lives during a blizzard.
Categories: Battle of the Planets
Series: Blood Line
Chapters: 4 - Table of Contents
Characters: Chief Anderson, Don Wade, Jason, Keyop, Mark, Original Character, Princess, Tiny Harper
Genre: Action/Adventure
Story Warnings: Mild Adult Situations, Mild Language
Timeframe: Other
Universe: Alternate Universe, Cross-Over
Word count: 7801 - Read Count: 5968 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 01/31/2008 - Published: 01/30/2008
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Date: 01/31/2008 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Ahhhh...you are killing me with the suspense! :D Just what is up with Jason? Pleeeease tell us soon! (see I am begging for another story!)

Another good read!

Author's Response: My problem right now is I have too many different arcs going on.  I'm stuck on a part of No Laughing Matter, the next story.  As for Jason...let's just say he's in for it.

- The Angel by Firebird - Rated: 13+ - - starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
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Summary: Response to a dark and stormy night challenge.
Categories: Gatchaman
Series: None
Chapters: 1 - Table of Contents
Characters: Jun, Original Character
Genre: Angst
Story Warnings: None
Timeframe: Other
Universe: Tenuously Canon
Word count: 1104 - Read Count: 1672 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 02/10/2008 - Published: 02/10/2008
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Date: 10/01/2013 Title: Chapter 1: The Angel

No idea how I missed this back when it was posted. But wow! What a powerful piece. Well done.

- Evolution by TransmuteJun - Rated: Adult - - starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 9]
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Summary:

Princess doesn't feel quite like herself... and neither does Mark.

Excerpt

“Princess, listen, about what Mark said yesterday…”

Princess stiffened, and Jason could hear her sharp intake of breath. He chose to forge ahead anyway, knowing that he only had a few moments before the Commander finished receiving his last minute instructions in the Docking Bay.

“Look, the guy is clueless, okay?”

Princess sighed, and Jason could see her head nodding slightly. Encouraged, he took a deep breath and continued.

“I was worried about you, when I saw you run out of Jill’s. I wanted to go after you, but figured it probably wasn’t such a great idea.”

“Thanks.” muttered Princess quietly, a hint of pink staining her cheeks.
 

 


Categories: Battle of the Planets
Series: None
Chapters: 28 - Table of Contents
Characters: Chief Anderson, Colonel Cronus, Jason, Mark, Princess
Genre: Angst, Drama, Plot-What-Plot, Romance
Story Warnings: Erotica, Mature Content, Mild Adult Situations, Mild Language, Mild Sexual References, Mild Violence, Sexual Dialogue, Sexual Situations
Timeframe: Mid-Series
Universe: Canon
Word count: 39389 - Read Count: 6927 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 02/21/2008 - Published: 02/10/2008
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Reviewer: Nephedra Signed
Date: 02/14/2008 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Interesting and vivid. Oh boy is Mark going to be mad when he wakes up!

Once again you have shown that you have thought about the cultures of the planets involved and provided us a glimps of how different these cultures are. I like the background. I hope there is more to come as I am having a hard time figuring out how Cronus planned a marriage for a son he has not even acknowledged in may years, at least on Earth.

Not to be picky - but well when I like something....Thom Cronus? A confusing name choice if you ask me. Tom is Mark's friend from the Academy.

Curious to know how this all comes out in the end. :D

Author's Response:

I completely forgot about Tom being Mark's friend from the Academy! I was just trying to come up with an 'exotic' name that didn't sound completely 'human'. I came caross the name 'Thom awhile ago and it seemed to fit Cronus, so i've used it in a few of my fics. It was sort of familiar, but sort of not, which fit the bill. Ah well, he's stuck with it now. *grin*

I'll let you in on a little secret about the 'culture' aspect... I'm a big Star Trek fan and this entire fic was based on the idea of the Vulcan Pon Far. Since Mark is technically an 'alien', the idea seemed too good to pass up! You'll notice I bypassed the 'every 7 years part! But the rest of the 'Rigan Society' came from there. Plus it allowed me to explain why a loser like Cronus actually got married in the first place! Can you tell I'm not a RI/Cronus fan? ;-)

- Work Experience by cathrl - Rated: 13+ - - starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 7]
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Summary: Samantha Mitchell never meant to become a mechanic. Her work placement at ISO Racing was a mistake, pure and simple. But it was her mistake, one she wasn't about to admit to...and that meant sticking it out for two long weeks...
Categories: Battle of the Planets
Series: Cath's Battle AU
Chapters: 9 - Table of Contents
Characters: Mary Sue
Genre: General
Story Warnings: Mild Adult Situations, Mild Language, Mild Sexual References, Mild Violence
Timeframe: Other
Universe: Alternate Universe
Word count: 19047 - Read Count: 12706 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 05/24/2008 - Published: 05/24/2008
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Reviewer: Nephedra Signed
Date: 05/30/2008 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Ah....one more great story in a line of great stories. Made my day yesterday to read this! I agree with others. This is no Mary Sue. This is a side bar story, true, but with you everything has purpose or at least seems that way to me even if not to you at the moment. ;) I like this coming of age story, cliches and all. I like the peek into Jason's other world and the glimpse of him in it too. Overall this adds even more depth to your universe. Well done!

And the US school system...pretty close actually. :) If Sam was looking to be a beautician she was probably in a votech (Vocation Technical School) experience offered from public school. So the work experience thing would have happened at some point and would have included the option for car maintance as well as other things.

Summary: Only one Spectran Green Goon left to apprehend. Recover the microfilm and then the team can then go home. Unfortunately the Goon tries to hide in the middle of a convention, a convention that G-Force slowly realizes isn't what it seems... So much for simple...
Categories: Battle of the Planets
Series: None
Chapters: 1 - Table of Contents
Characters: Goon, Jason, Keyop, Mark, Princess, Tiny Harper
Genre: Action/Adventure, Humor/Comedy
Story Warnings: None
Timeframe: Mid-Series
Universe: Tenuously Canon
Challenges: Convention Fanfic Challenge
Word count: 5227 - Read Count: 2786 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 06/08/2008 - Published: 06/08/2008
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Reviewer: Nephedra Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 08/18/2009 Title: Chapter 1: A Goon in the Henhouse

This popped up on the random generator today and I thought I would re-read it. Although I have never been to a convention this seemed real enough to me as I imgine it to be a pretty crazy event. I liked the precision in the capture, and as always love it when the eagle defends the swan! Well done!