Penname: Amethyst [Contact] Real name: Amethyst
Member Since: 06/19/2009
Membership status: Member
Bio:
I have been a fan since the release of BotP in 1978. G-Force were very good friends to a lonely eight-year-old in a new town with very few real life friends.

In addition to this fandom, I am active in the Harry Potter fandom: reading, writing, admining at SH.

In addition to my stories here, you can find others at:

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Reviews by Amethyst
- Perception by Diinzumo - Rated: 8+ - - starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
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Summary:

Halloween at the Snack Jun, and Joe gets a surprise.


Categories: Gatchaman
Series: None
Chapters: 1 - Table of Contents
Characters: Joe Asakura
Genre: Horror
Story Warnings: Mild Language
Timeframe: Mid-Series
Universe: Canon
Word count: 1867 - Read Count: 2593 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 05/17/2007 - Published: 05/17/2007
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Date: 07/07/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was brilliant! And I could just picture Joe with one of those Katse masks on the wall of his trailer using it for target practice with ten shuriken around the eyes and nose.

Author's Response: Thanks! He probably would, too.

Summary: Anderson looks at one of his darkest times, and reflects that even things that irritate you the most become a blessing when it seems they may be lost forever. Part of my “Generations” Arc.
Categories: Battle of the Planets
Series: Generations Arc
Chapters: 1 - Table of Contents
Characters: Chief Anderson, Jason, Keyop, Mark, Princess, Tiny Harper
Genre: Angst, Drama
Story Warnings: Mild Sexual References
Timeframe: Other
Universe: Alternate Universe, Tenuously Canon
Word count: 2420 - Read Count: 1886 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 05/19/2007 - Published: 05/19/2007
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Date: 03/14/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Sometimes, Even a Herd of Thundering Wildebeest is a Blessing

Just had to say that I always enjoy reading and rereading this vignette. It shows a side of Anderson that is not often seen.

Author's Response: Thanks.  This was actually the first time I had written a "home" scene for the team

- Prisoner of War by Ennien - Rated: Adult - - starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
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Summary: Princess is taken to Spectra as a prisoner of war, but she quickly finds out Spectra is not all that she thought. As she is introduced to more of Spectra, by Zoltar no less, she then learns about a prophecy that she might be apart of.
Categories: Battle of the Planets
Series: Ennien's BotP Arc
Chapters: 9 - Table of Contents
Characters: Chief Anderson, Goon, Great Spirit, Jason, Keyop, Mala/S-9, Mark, Original Character, Princess, Tiny Harper, Zoltar
Genre: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort, Mystery, Romance, Tragedy
Story Warnings: Adult Situations, Blood, Guts & Gore, Crude Humor, Death, Erotica, Mature Content, Sexual Dialogue, Sexual Situations, Strong Language, Torture, Violence
Timeframe: Other
Universe: Alternate Universe, Tenuously Canon
Word count: 74934 - Read Count: 2357 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 06/30/2007 - Published: 05/28/2007
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Date: 04/19/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prisoner of War

I loved this story! The dichotomy between Zoltar and the Great Spirit while not seen in the show is very believable. I do hope that you have plans for a sequel.

Summary: One of Jason's closest friends is killed by a drunk driver. He takes it out on the Spectrans.
Categories: Battle of the Planets
Series: Scavengers
Chapters: 1 - Table of Contents
Characters: Chief Anderson, Jason, Keyop, Mark, Princess, Tiny Harper
Genre: Angst, Drama
Story Warnings: Blood, Guts & Gore, Mild Language
Timeframe: Mid-Series
Universe: Mostly Canon
Word count: 10441 - Read Count: 1953 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 06/09/2007 - Published: 06/09/2007
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Date: 07/12/2009 Title: Chapter 1: I Will Not Be Silent

Whatever inspired it, this story was well written and I'm glad that you wrote it and that I had the chance to read it. I grew up in a small town. So small that a year after graduation one of my friends and classmates, along with a girl a year behind us, were killed by a drunk driver, who happened to be another classmate. The kid did time at they CYA and then community service through public speaking. He eventually became a volunteer firefighter in town, and helped to save my husbands life one night. This story does a very good job of showing differing perspectives on a heinous act of stupidity.

- SACRIFICE by Becky Rock - Rated: 13+ - - starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 13]
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Summary:

Like many others, I didn't care for the ending of the Top Cow BotP comic, which implied Jason had defected to Spectra.  This is my version of what happened.

This story begins when Mark realizes Jason isn’t aboard the Phoenix.


Categories: Battle of the Planets
Series: Sacrifice
Chapters: 19 - Table of Contents
Characters: None
Genre: Angst
Story Warnings: Adult Situations
Timeframe: Other
Universe: Alternate Universe
Word count: 47439 - Read Count: 30861 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 05/01/2010 - Published: 07/02/2007
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Date: 05/01/2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Becky, that was a wonderful chapter I'm glad you finally got it up! For a moment I wasn't sure what direction you were going, whether they had the real Jason back or not, but now I think they do.

One thing you might consider, now that you have this up. See if you can edit to fix the formatting; the large block of text makes the chapter difficult to read.

Author's Response: Hi Ame! I hate computers. It looks fine when I paste it and then it loses every space and paragraph, etc. Growl!! Off to fix it.

Summary: Ever watch a show you liked when you were a kid after you've grown up and then you caught all the innuendo that went over your head when you were 8? This story was inspired by such a thing. Contains a lot of innuendo.
Categories: Battle of the Planets
Series: None
Chapters: 1 - Table of Contents
Characters: 7-Zark-7/1-Rover-1/Susan, Jason, Princess
Genre: Humor/Comedy
Story Warnings: Crude Humor, Nose-Cola Warning, Sexual Dialogue
Timeframe: None
Universe: Mostly Canon
Word count: 1783 - Read Count: 4586 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 08/11/2007 - Published: 08/10/2007
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Date: 07/04/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Too Hot for Zark!

That has to be one of the funniest things I've ever read; and definitely the best fanfiction written in script format. I say that as a mod in another fandom who uses deletes the stories that come in written as scripts.

Author's Response: Thank you.  I'm very flattered.  :)

- Blood Line by Becky Rock - Rated: 13+ - - starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
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Summary: This is the beginning of the Blood Line series.  Jason is attending college in St Louis and finds the coming war with Spectra isn't the only thing he has to worry about.
Categories: Battle of the Planets
Series: Blood Line
Chapters: 26 - Table of Contents
Characters: Chief Anderson, Colonel Cronus, Don Wade, Jason, Keyop, Mark, Original Character, Other Crossover Character, Princess, Tiny Harper
Genre: Action/Adventure, Angst
Story Warnings: Adult Situations, Mild Language, Mild Sexual References, Violence
Timeframe: Prequel
Universe: Alternate Universe, Cross-Over
Word count: 73974 - Read Count: 32368 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 01/24/2008 - Published: 12/27/2007
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Date: 01/03/2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Glad I finally read this. Not being into the Anita Blake series, made this hard to get into the first time I tried to read it. It was much easier to read after reading your original story, Daywalker. Though, I do like your original characters much better than Hamilton's. I think they are stronger. I'm curious about Jason's background and look forward to reading more.

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. I just wish I could write the series faster. I've got 5-6 more stories partially written but need to finish Blood and Roses to go on.

Summary: This immediately follows Blood Line.  The team has gone to destroy the Spectran base that birthed the Terrapin, but instead, Mark and Jason find themselves running for their lives during a blizzard.
Categories: Battle of the Planets
Series: Blood Line
Chapters: 4 - Table of Contents
Characters: Chief Anderson, Don Wade, Jason, Keyop, Mark, Original Character, Princess, Tiny Harper
Genre: Action/Adventure
Story Warnings: Mild Adult Situations, Mild Language
Timeframe: Other
Universe: Alternate Universe, Cross-Over
Word count: 7801 - Read Count: 6124 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 01/31/2008 - Published: 01/30/2008
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Date: 01/03/2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Interesting twist. I'm curious if this Spirit will make a return in your series? Is she a were or is she the ghost of a were? However, I like the ambiguity of it, too.

Author's Response: This idea actually came to me in a dream about a ghost saving my life. Thought about it for a while and this fic came out of it. Now, I'm not saying Jocasta is a ghost...or isn't. It's for the reader to decide.

Summary:

This is part of my Blood Line BotP Laurell K. Hamilton Anita Blake, Vampire Hunter cross-over series.  This story takes place a few months after Spirit of the Mountain. Zoltar has kidnapped 9 preternatural specialists and G-Force has to go to St. Louis to find out why.


Categories: Battle of the Planets
Series: Blood Line
Chapters: 11 - Table of Contents
Characters: Chief Anderson, Don Wade, Goon, Jason, Keyop, Mark, Original Character, Princess, Tiny Harper
Genre: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama
Story Warnings: Adult Situations
Timeframe: Mid-Series
Universe: Alternate Universe
Word count: 20552 - Read Count: 14635 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 09/19/2008 - Published: 04/15/2008
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Date: 01/03/2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Interesting. I like how Don is an actual team member. I wonder how is canon history will play out here, or if it will. There seems to be some hints of it, and other times, as if turning traitor would be the last thing on his mind.

Author's Response: I wanted Don there to give some background canon didn't have. I wanted the animosity between him and Jason developed, too. It's hard to respond to what I have planned for Don's future without giving it away, bit I can say Blood and Roses will determine it.

Summary: Ms Ann reviews A Swarm of Robot Ants and Battle of the Underground Monsters.
Categories: Gatchaman, Battle of the Planets
Series: Ms. Ann OMalley Reviews Gatchaman and Battle of the Planets.
Chapters: 2 - Table of Contents
Characters: 7-Zark-7/1-Rover-1/Susan, Berg Katse, Chief Anderson, Colonel Cronus, Dr. Kozaburou Nambu, Jason, Jinpei, Joe Asakura, Jun, Ken Washio, Kentaro/Red Impulse, Keyop, Mark, Phoenix/God Phoenix, Princess, Ryu Nakanishi, Sosai X, Tiny Harper, Zoltar
Genre: Plot-What-Plot
Story Warnings: Nose-Cola Warning
Timeframe: Other
Universe: None
Word count: 10478 - Read Count: 3154 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 08/10/2008 - Published: 08/10/2008
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Date: 07/05/2009 Title: Chapter 1: BoTP Episode 10: A Swarm of Robot Ants

Well, I now know where most of my middle school class learned to dance; sadly I remember most of us dancing like that in the early 80's. Of course we were a small backwards town that was said to be 20 years behind the times. We did have modern music though. One-third the class danced to the hair-metal, one-third danced to new-wave, and the rest of the idiots danced to bubble gum pop. It is really sad that so many of your reviews trigger flashbacks to my youth. I must say that I'll never look at a bullet-vibe (TMI!!!)without cringing. Though I am tempted to buy one, paint it up like Zark and send it to my cousin, the Mark fan, who I am not speaking to.

Reviewer: Amethyst Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/05/2009 Title: Chapter 2: Gatchaman Episode 10-Battle of the Underground Monsters

Actually, I could see Ken skipping off and joining a monastry once everything is done. Of course I also think that he is the team leader by default because: A) Nambu felt sorry for Ken because Ken's father was a friend and Nambu ordered him away from his family B) Joe didn't want the job C)Nambu didn't want Joe to have the job because they'ed fight more D) Or Maybe Nambu didn't completely trust Joe at that time.

Summary: G-4 learns a valuable lesson about popularity.   However, Ms. Ann O'Malley still has trouble typing the word anemone.
Categories: Gatchaman, Battle of the Planets
Series: Ms. Ann OMalley Reviews Gatchaman and Battle of the Planets.
Chapters: 2 - Table of Contents
Characters: 7-Zark-7/1-Rover-1/Susan, Berg Katse, Chief Anderson, Dr. Kozaburou Nambu, Great Spirit, Jason, Jinpei, Joe Asakura, Jun, Ken Washio, Keyop, Mark, Princess, Ryu Nakanishi, Sosai X, Tiny Harper, Zoltar
Genre: Episode Review
Story Warnings: Crude Humor, Nose-Cola Warning
Timeframe: None
Universe: None
Word count: 8832 - Read Count: 3346 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 09/09/2008 - Published: 09/09/2008
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Date: 07/05/2009 Title: Chapter 1: BoTP Episode 8-The Fearful Sea Anemone

ROTFL! Have I mentioned how much I've enjoyed reading your reviews? The description of the highway reststops in Wisconsin reminded me of some of the ones we hit on I-80 and other highways too numerous to mention when my parents insisted that we drive from California to Wisconsin for vacation when I was fifteen. To top it off they wouldn't even let me drive even though I had my learners permit. I think they were afraid of what I might try to do with my mother' Thunderbird on the interstate (especially considering she wouldn't even let me drive it around town). What that has to do with this review, I'm not sure but your introduction got me thinking of that. And our trip the next year to Wisconsin when we flew out, only to be met with my Cousin (the idiot who thinks that Mark is the greatest incarnation of G-1) and her parents who are telling my uncle that it's all right for her to drive because she has her learners permit, and all of them missed the look in my eye that would have warned them that if the keys got put in her hand she'd have been pounded to a pulp before she even got the door open.

Summary: When Standards and Practices Attacks...
Categories: Gatchaman, Battle of the Planets
Series: Ms. Ann OMalley Reviews Gatchaman and Battle of the Planets.
Chapters: 1 - Table of Contents
Characters: 7-Zark-7/1-Rover-1/Susan, Berg Katse, Chief Anderson, Dr. Kozaburou Nambu, Jason, Jinpei, Joe Asakura, Jun, Ken Washio, Keyop, Mark, Princess, Ryu Nakanishi, Sosai X, Tiny Harper, Zoltar
Genre: Episode Review
Story Warnings: Nose-Cola Warning
Timeframe: None
Universe: None
Word count: 3815 - Read Count: 1469 - Completed: No
Updated: 09/22/2008 - Published: 09/22/2008
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Date: 07/04/2009 Title: Chapter 1: BoTP Episode Two--Rescue of the Astronauts

When I was eight, my cousin and I would get into fights about who was better Jason or Mark. They usually ended with me punching her and her crying (I think that should give away our sides). Casey Kasem is Shaggy, and even without his "zoinks" he will always either be Shaggy or the annoying Bandstand guy and all of his other characters come across as an annoying mix between the two. Mark being closer to the annoying Bandstand guy; maybe he'd have been cooler if he said "zoinks" once in awhile.

Author's Response: LOL!  Or was always hungry.  Or had a canine sidekick.

Summary: Our Heroes battle a giant, flaming man.  Did I mention he is really on fire?  Literally? 
Categories: Gatchaman, Battle of the Planets
Series: Ms. Ann OMalley Reviews Gatchaman and Battle of the Planets.
Chapters: 2 - Table of Contents
Characters: 7-Zark-7/1-Rover-1/Susan, Berg Katse, Chief Anderson, Dr. Kozaburou Nambu, Great Spirit, Jason, Jinpei, Joe Asakura, Jun, Ken Washio, Keyop, Mark, Princess, Ryu Nakanishi, Sosai X, Tiny Harper, Zoltar
Genre: Episode Review, Humor/Comedy
Story Warnings: Crude Humor, Drug References, Nose-Cola Warning
Timeframe: None
Universe: None
Word count: 9110 - Read Count: 3746 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 09/22/2008 - Published: 09/22/2008
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Date: 07/06/2009 Title: Chapter 2: Gatchaman Episode 25--Magma Giant, Emperor of Hell

WTF!!!! I had to stop mid-read to write part of this review, because the only way I could concentrate on reading the rest was to write my thoughts down.

First, I’ve not seen the Gatchaman version of this episode yet, only the BotP, so my eyes bugged out completely when I read that Mt Rushmore was in the Gatch-verse version of Yellowstone. I began to wonder about my teachers and my own since of geography. Which may not be great, but I did visit Mt Rushmore and the Black Hills when I was fifteen and my parents thought it would be fun to drive from north of San Francisico to Wisconsin to visit my aunt and uncle in Kenosha. Thankfully, my cousin the Mark fan was doing whatever Mark fans do, and no where near us. But I’ve never been to Yellowstone; though when I was four, I did want to visit Jellystone and meet Yogi.

Second, well, now we know why the Flaming Hippie Dude from the previous chapter looked like George Harrison.

Third, I think we can blame Channel 11 in Green Bay for the abomination of the nineties, called Barney. Sosai X must have taken over one of their executives and combined your white-blob with Berg Katse and Godzilla (which I believe is the other show you referenced with the song-bite).

Now, I can return to reading, after writing probably the longest review I’ve written for non-academic purposes. I wish my students would give me this much to comment on with there writing. Most of the time I correct their grammar and let it pass because the truth would just be to brutal for their over-PC’d minds to comprehend.

Shasta is not dormant nor is it on the peninsula! St. Helena (not to be confused with St. Helens which is an active volcano in Washington) is a remnant of one that blew itself to bits thousands of years ago, but it is still not on the peninsula. I can’t speak for much below Monterey. Crap, I’m beginning to think that I know more geography than these writers, and I didn’t do so well with the subject in the sixth and ninth grades when it was taught in California.

I won’t comment on the religious bashing, mostly because I have none. Ironically I married an Italian without religion (quite funny, being English and German it’s not so surprising that most of my family is Protestant/Agnostic/Athiest, but my hubby’s family, who are primarily Italian are the same way except for an aunt and his sister, but she only converted once she got married and had kids), so maybe there is hope that Condor Joe growing up away from the Pope and Catholic discrimination practices (and yes they are quite discriminatory) was not brainwashed to believe that the rest of us, who practice common sense and believe that woman have rights to their own bodies, will not be banished to purgatory for eternity. Besides the creators also bashed the Buddhist with the Buddha-mech, so it all evens out.

Summary:

This is part of my Blood Line series. While one member of G-Force may have met the love of his life, another may have met the one that will kill him.


Categories: Battle of the Planets
Series: Blood Line
Chapters: 15 - Table of Contents
Characters: Chief Anderson, Don Wade, Jason, Keyop, Mark, Original Character, Princess, Tiny Harper
Genre: Angst, Romance
Story Warnings: Graphic Violence, Mature Content, Sexual Situations, Violence
Timeframe: Mid-Series
Universe: Alternate Universe
Word count: 24296 - Read Count: 24917 - Completed: No
Updated: 06/23/2013 - Published: 10/29/2008
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Date: 01/03/2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

That was hot!

Author's Response: I tried. Writing smut is still new to me.

Summary: An explosion sends G-Force through a wormhole one hundred and twenty years into the future. A crossover with Star Trek Enterprise.  
Categories: Battle of the Planets
Series: None
Chapters: 9 - Table of Contents
Characters: Jason, Keyop, Mark, Princess, Tiny Harper
Genre: Action/Adventure
Story Warnings: None
Timeframe: Time Travel
Universe: Cross-Over
Word count: 15275 - Read Count: 14911 - Completed: No
Updated: 01/19/2019 - Published: 03/18/2009
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Date: 07/08/2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I do hope you continue with this story. It is quite good; though I now I need to go back and brush up on what I know of "Star Trek: Enterprise" as that is the series I'm least familiar with. But I still really like the story.

Author's Response: Yes, I will be continuing it, but cancer has struck my family and writing is taking a temporary back seat. For stress relief, I've bene trying to write a few lines a night. They're adding up, but the next section isn't done yet. Thanks for your understanding.

Reviewer: Amethyst Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/08/2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Becky, this update made my day. I've had to go back and watch some Enterprise episodes to make sure that I wasn't going to miss anything. You've got the description of Phlox's sickbay perfect, and the team's reactions are great. Looking forward to another update.

Author's Response: Thanks Amy. I want to keep everyone in character but still tell the story. Not as easy as it seems.

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Date: 09/11/2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Just want to reiterate that I think you've captured the personalities of both teams brilliantly. Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Thanks Ame - and for your help!

Summary: When Earworms attack! 
Categories: Gatchaman, Battle of the Planets
Series: Ms. Ann OMalley Reviews Gatchaman and Battle of the Planets.
Chapters: 2 - Table of Contents
Characters: 7-Zark-7/1-Rover-1/Susan, Berg Katse, Chief Anderson, Dr. Kozaburou Nambu, Great Spirit, Jason, Jinpei, Joe Asakura, Jun, Ken Washio, Keyop, Mark, Other Canon Character, Princess, Ryu Nakanishi, Sosai X, Tiny Harper, Zoltar
Genre: Episode Review, Humor/Comedy
Story Warnings: Nose-Cola Warning
Timeframe: None
Universe: None
Word count: 4845 - Read Count: 3089 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 11/17/2014 - Published: 06/27/2009
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Date: 07/05/2009 Title: Chapter 1: BotP Episode 34-Space Rock Concert

I just watched the ADV dubbed version of this. The one thing I noticed is the band reminded me of the Rolling Stones when they backed up Bette Midler for her recording of Beast of Burden (Yes they all looked that old and road worn). And of course half the crowd looked to be the age we are now (late thirties) and over a quarter looked to be the age my parents are now (that lost generation between the fifties beatniks and the hippies of the late sixties and early seventies who are now in their sixties and seventies). Only a handfule looked to be teens and young adults.

Summary: This is Part III in my three part Ties That Bind Series. Now that Red Impulse is gone, can Ken finally shake his father's shadow?
Categories: Gatchaman
Series: Origins, The Ties That Bind
Chapters: 18 - Table of Contents
Characters: Berg Katse, Dr. Kozaburou Nambu, Goon, Jinpei, Joe Asakura, Jun, Ken Washio, Kentaro/Red Impulse, Original Character, Other Canon Character, Phoenix/God Phoenix, Ryu Nakanishi, Sosai X
Genre: Action/Adventure, Angst, Character Study, Drama, Hurt/Comfort, Tragedy
Story Warnings: Blood, Guts & Gore, Death, Drug References, Graphic Violence, Mature Content, Mild Language, Mild Violence, Strong Language, Torture, Violence
Timeframe: Mid-Series
Universe: Mostly Canon
Word count: 48302 - Read Count: 18393 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 09/30/2009 - Published: 09/22/2009
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Date: 09/25/2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

It's great that you included this episode. I've always thought that there was a lot of undeclared UST between Joe and Jun in the snack bar scene. I think it might be the only time that he has hit her, and it struck me as being not just anger at her behavior but a bit of jealousy as well.

Author's Response: Well of course there's jealousy! ;-)   But yes, if I was writing this from Joe's POV, I knew I had to write through the Bitter Bird Missile ep. Too much opportunity for angst to be denied... 

Summary: Joe's entry into Dr. Nambu's life, told mostly through Joe's POV.
Categories: Gatchaman
Series: Gatchaman AU - Dr. Nambu and the SNT
Chapters: 1 - Table of Contents
Characters: Dr. Kozaburou Nambu, Joe Asakura
Genre: Hurt/Comfort
Story Warnings: Death
Timeframe: Prequel
Universe: Alternate Universe
Word count: 4877 - Read Count: 1660 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 09/28/2009 - Published: 09/27/2009
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Date: 09/29/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Glad to see you put this up over here. This is one of my favorites.

Reviewer: Amethyst Signed
Date: 09/29/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hey, UW, if you need help with HTML I can help. Simple codes are i - italics, b - bold, u - underline, hr -line. If you need others or more specific html help just let me know.

Author's Response: I tried that. Ended up with everything in italics and centered. So I had to change things.

- Generations by Madilayn - Rated: Adult - - starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 12]
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Summary:

History repeats itself when Mark leaes his wife of six months to go on a mission.  When he returns 18 years later, nothing is the same.  His disappearance has affected everybody around him - and his own experience have left him deeply scarred.

Does Mark have a chance to rebuild his life with Princess?  Or will he be forced to sacrifice his own feelings to keep her family together?


Categories: Battle of the Planets
Series: Generations Arc
Chapters: 22 - Table of Contents
Characters: Chief Anderson, Colonel Cronus, Jason, Keyop, Mark, Original Character, Phoenix/God Phoenix, Princess, Tiny Harper, Zoltar
Genre: Angst, Drama, Epic, Romance, Tragedy
Story Warnings: Adult Situations, Drug References, Drug Use, Erotica, Explicit Material, Mature Content, Sexual Dialogue, Sexual Situations, Slash, Strong Language, Torture, Violence
Timeframe: Sequel
Universe: Tenuously Canon
Word count: 51902 - Read Count: 2845 - Completed: No
Updated: 04/20/2010 - Published: 02/21/2010
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Date: 03/14/2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Great job! I think I know where you're heading relationship-wise, but love that you throw in twists to keep the reader guessing. I loved the earlier argument, it shows that they are not immune to the stress of the situation and that they each have issues to work through before moving forward.

Author's Response: Thanks.  They all have mindsets that need to change before a resolution can be made.  I realised though when I wrote the vignette "Phoenix" that I gave a rather blatant hint as to the final outcome.

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Date: 04/09/2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Oh, Maddy, that was perfect, absolutely perfect.

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed.

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Date: 04/20/2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

It seems like they are starting to turn a corner on both the personal and professional aspects of their lives. Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thanks Amethyst - I hope you're enjoying.