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Summary: Ken goes out on his normal mail run and finds himself in an unusual storm...When gets back to his Shack later that day everything has changed...

Illustrated, by Springie.

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He tried to push through the crowd of drunken men, almost nearly punching one that who made a comment about her spending a night with him.

He finally made it to the front as the stage lights flashed as she hooked her left leg around the pole and leaned back with her eyes closed and took off the sexy red satin bra right in front of him, only inches from his face.
Categories: Gatchaman
Series: None
Chapters: 33 - Table of Contents
Characters: Berg Katse, Devil Star/Galaxy Girl, Dr. Kozaburou Nambu, Egobossler, Gel Sadra, Jinpei, Joe Asakura, Jun, Ken Washio, Original Character, Sosai X
Genre: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, Romance, Tragedy
Story Warnings: Adult Situations, Death, Erotica, Mature Content, Mild Adult Situations, Sexual Situations
Timeframe: Mid-Series, Time Travel
Universe: Alternate Universe, Tenuously Canon
Word count: 103796 - Read Count: 53129 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 02/21/2008 - Published: 09/06/2007
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Reviewer: Rachel Signed
Date: 01/18/2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- Katse's new toy

Thank you for your great work.

I really love your fanfics. And your wrting is much easier to read than other's. I mean, as my mother tongue is not English, sometimes I have difficulties to understand the whole stories. But your clear desceiption and writing skills helped me a lot. 

 When I first clicked this story, I roughly browsed it. But time leap, stripper Jun and dinosaurs made me just escape from the pages. I thought that I was too childish!!! But after reading all of your stories, I found that your works are very worth to read anyway. So I came back to this story.

Ebony, I really appreciate for you again sharing this wonderful fanfic. :D

 

Rachel Lee 



Author's Response: Wow thank you for a lovely review. It was one of those stories I was in a mood for a bit of everything. Thanks for reading it all the way through. :)

- Inhibitions by TransmuteJun - Rated: Adult - - starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
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Summary:

When the Condor is administered a Galactor drug, the consequences are unexpected.

Excerpt

“Don’t move.” ordered the Swan, as she aimed her sonic gun at Gel Sadra’s position.

But the Galactor Leader was too well-practiced at escape to surrender. Snarling, she flipped her billowing cape around herself, using the distraction to open a hidden panel in the wall. Gel Sadra felt a blast from the Swan’s weapon scorch her leg as she ran, but was able to close the opening behind her, preventing her enemy’s pursuit.


Jun was frustrated by Gel Sadra’s escape, but her primary concern was Joe.

“Are you all right?” she asked, as her teammate thrashed on the table in front of her.

His eyelids snapped open and he stared disbelievingly into her face.

“Jun…” he whispered, grabbing her shoulders tightly. “You’re real…”


Categories: Gatchaman
Series: None
Chapters: 26 - Table of Contents
Characters: Gel Sadra, Joe Asakura, Jun, Ken Washio
Genre: Angst, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Story Warnings: Adult Situations, Drug References, Erotica, Explicit Material, Mature Content, Mild Adult Situations, Mild Language, Mild Sexual References, Mild Violence, Sexual Dialogue, Sexual Situations
Timeframe: Mid-Series
Universe: Canon
Word count: 50330 - Read Count: 9460 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 09/17/2007 - Published: 09/16/2007
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Reviewer: Rachel Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 10/30/2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I think it must be read by J&J supporters.

Three character's original personality is incredibly well-described in this fiction. 

 Ken- Always his duty goes the first, jusk like his father. Sometimes it seems selfish. He well knows that there isn't a girl who can refuse him. He must be a bed guy hurting girls. Under his gentle mask, he is hiding selfish and authoritative personality.  But still deadly attractive. 

It seems that in this fiction, Ken is always being angry and calm. His personality is a little bit flat. I'm afraid that it does not fully shows Ken's appealing character. 

 But anyway, I really enjoyed your fiction and I'd like to appreciate for your effort. 

 I hope someday Tatsunoko release adult-version of original Gatchaman.

Just like <Game of Thrones>.

It is a fantasy tales for adults, full of blood, slash, sexuality and politics.

Now that we are not KIDS!! Yoo-Hoo-!

 

PS)I re-wrote review. because I forgot to rank the stars! 

Summary: Joe is returning from his tour of duty to be reunited with his son and friends after four long years. But something is waiting for him back home that could destroy his life entirely...
Categories: Gatchaman, Battle of the Planets
Series: A Tangled Web. , Ghosts of the past
Chapters: 13 - Table of Contents
Characters: Chief Anderson, Devil Star/Galaxy Girl, Great Spirit, Jason, Jinpei, Joe Asakura, Jun, Ken Washio, Zoltar
Genre: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, Romance
Story Warnings: Adult Situations, Mild Sexual References
Timeframe: Other
Universe: Alternate Universe, Mostly Canon
Word count: 25972 - Read Count: 18648 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 08/20/2009 - Published: 08/16/2009
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Reviewer: Rachel Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/02/2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I hope someday your twins would let their mother return to writing part2. :)

Thank you, Evony.

I really love your fics. 

I'm very lucky to read this part1 in 2014.

If I did it in 2009, I should have had been dead in front of my monitors waiting for part2. 



Author's Response: I'm sorry to keep you waiting so long. Its been on my mind to finish it properly. I don't like leaving things unfinished. Life took over... I'm hand writing the next bits to put them together in quiet time now that I have two of the kids at school. It has 3 parts altogether.

- Valentine by TransmuteJun - Rated: 13+ - - starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
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Summary: Jun searches for that special Valentine, year after year...
Categories: Gatchaman
Series: None
Chapters: 6 - Table of Contents
Characters: Joe Asakura, Jun, Ken Washio, Ryu Nakanishi
Genre: Angst, Character Study, Drama, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Story Warnings: Mild Language
Timeframe: Mid-Series
Universe: Canon
Word count: 5107 - Read Count: 2382 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 02/04/2014 - Published: 02/04/2014
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Reviewer: Rachel Signed
Date: 02/07/2014 Title: Chapter 1: Thirteen

I love the thirteen's vanlentine the most. Cause it is really typical of Joe! :D Poor Jun.

And Ken's goofy comment on the read head girl made me convulsed with laughter. 



Author's Response: I think Ken has a thing for redheads... 

- Stone by TransmuteJun - Rated: 13+ - - starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 7]
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Summary: What is there to do when the worst happens? G-Force must survive an unthinkable tragedy.
Categories: Battle of the Planets
Series: None
Chapters: 14 - Table of Contents
Characters: Chief Anderson, Jason, Keyop, Mark, Phoenix/God Phoenix, Princess, Tiny Harper, Zoltar
Genre: Angst, Character Study, Drama, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, Tragedy
Story Warnings: Death, Mild Adult Situations, Mild Violence, Violence
Timeframe: Mid-Series
Universe: Mostly Canon
Word count: 35483 - Read Count: 5499 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 02/20/2014 - Published: 02/20/2014
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Reviewer: Rachel Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 02/27/2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

What if Keyop in the alcove is the original sparrow?? 

What if Original Mark is still concious??

What if ISO scientists find the way to recover him into flesh?? 

 When above three questions came up to my mind, it was really piquant and thrilling!!  Thank you. I really enjoyed the every work of this fic. Since I barely wrote reviews on your works, but I'm your big fan.  :)

But I suggest that romance scenes need to be more specific. I mean, the last part of chapter 12. Hm Hm!! Maybe that's why the half of the fifth star is missing. *evil grin*

 

PS 1) google "How to Build a Beating Heart"- National Geographic documentary. It may give you a good source of idea. 

PS 2) Am I the only one who was attracted to Zoltar in this fic?? So CUTE!! Don't know why. haha.



Author's Response:

LOL, all good questions! This fic raised some other interesting questions on Gatchamania regarding cloning and the consequences, and what if other clones can be built and activated... does that mean that G-Force becomes disposable? It was a can of worms I hadn't anticipated when I started this fic. The reuqest was for Mark/Jason/Princess angst, with romantic overtones, when one fo them is turned to stone. I brught in the clone thing as a way to bring Princess and Jason closer, and (more importantly) a way to bring mark back. Given that this was written for the gift exchange, I thought it was long enough, and didn't devle into the clone implications as much as I could have. If you would like to explore such thoughts, yo uare certainly welcome to do so!

 

As for the 'more romantic' stuff, I've written plenty of that kind of thing, if that's what you want to see. You'd have to check out my M rated focs for that, or perhaps my 'Just Had To Get This Out' thread in the Gatchamania Rubber Room. ;-) 

Summary: From the Bradbury Jar in Gatchamania. A reporter claims she has proof Jason is the Condor.
Categories: Battle of the Planets
Series: None
Chapters: 1 - Table of Contents
Characters: Jason, Mark, Original Character
Genre: Action/Adventure, Drama
Story Warnings: None
Timeframe: Mid-Series
Universe: Canon
Word count: 4097 - Read Count: 1343 - Completed: Yes
Updated: 03/23/2014 - Published: 03/23/2014
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Reviewer: Rachel Signed
Date: 03/23/2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

LOL. I want to see the Chief cook salted Jason fillet to a cripsy roast. I know who will bring the grill.

Looking forward to next chapter. 



Author's Response:

Hi Rachel.

 

Actually, this is the whole thing. Are you a member of Gatchamania? It was created from parts in the Bradbury's Jar prompts posted there.