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Gatchaman Fiction Archive :: Transmute!
Reviews For Uneasy Lies the Head that Wears the Crown
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Reviewer: Chris White Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2012 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 2

I feel so sorry for Ken in particular. But then I'm partial to him. :)

Author's Response: Yeah, he has it rough here.  I was trying to come up with a believable way to have a Ken-Jun-Joe love triangle ultimately resolve in Joe's favour without Ken having to be a *complete* jerk but it is debatable how well I succeeded...

Reviewer: Ebonyswanne Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/07/2008 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 2

Angst angst angst... and now you have me wondering...did Ken really blow it that badly with Jun? or is there more twists to come in the next chapter? Well done and a big thumbs up from me...

 P.S you might want to break it dowm more into chapters, its hard to read 10,000 words in one sitting, especially with kids around my feet. I kept losing my place. 



Author's Response: Thanks!  I'm working on the third-and-final fic right now, but it's still got a ways to go.  I appreciate the advice on chapter length -I had never thought about how much more reader-friendly short chapters can be.  The third fic will be divided into more, shorter, chapters!

Reviewer: Springie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/05/2008 10:02 AM Title: Chapter 1

OMG! I have a anew favorite story to add to my list! This was beautiful! What a rollercoaster ride...angsty, sweet, funny, sad, smexy...all rolled into one! Great writing, lborgia!!!

Author's Response: Thank you!  I know you have a soft spot for fics or art that pair the Eagle and the Swan.  I'm glad you enjoyed this fic, even with the ending that it has!

Reviewer: gogirl212 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/02/2008 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 2

What a heart-wrenching sequel!  I loved it.  Thank you for crafting this passionate story.

Author's Response: You are most welcome!  These days, my fic-writing slogan does seem to be "I'm not happy until they're not happy."

Reviewer: Becky Rock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/02/2008 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 1

I liked that. Not too morose or mushy. No Joe showing up at the end to mess things up. Great story.

Author's Response: Thanks!  In the planning stages I decided that this fic should be just Ken and Jun, so I deliberately kept Joe out of it -he'll be in the third and final fic.  I'm glad you think it worked!

Reviewer: TransmuteJun Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/02/2008 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 2

Do I have to tell you how much I enjoyed this fic? You clearly have a wonderful insight into the characters and what makes them tick; in this case, for Ken. His willingness to diev into the relationship and then summarily end it are so quintessentially in his nature that it's really not surprising, and yet you made me feel for everyone involved.

I am looking forward to the sequel!

Author's Response: Thanks!  Do I have to tell you how much I rely on your beta-reading?  You'll be the first to see the sequel.

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