Date: 05/12/2010 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oh, this is so creepy...
I do like how you didn't actually state the all-to-obvious 'black widow' metaphor.
I love the writing and the pics.
I find it interesting how the mind control didn't actually keep them from being able to handle their daily lives, but did mess with their memories (apparently only emotion-intensive material was retained) and kept them from seeing just how unusual and potentially dangerous their decisions were. Freaky and well thought-out.
Keep it up!
PS Did I mention how much I like the 'movie posters' at the beginning of your fics? ;)
Author's Response: Thanks, Candi! I'm glad you liked the story...I wanted to write something where Jun had to save the guys for a change! I'm glad you like the movie posters, too! They are so much fun to make!
Date: 03/13/2010 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love the way you can take a crazy idea and make it work as a fic that fits right into canon! And you always give us the swooniness too... *grin* Awesome job, Baybee!
Author's Response: Ha! Sorry, TJ...I'm a little late responding to this! Thanks, baybee! You, of all people, know how much I live for swooniness! ;-)
Date: 07/17/2008 9:24 AM Title: Chapter 1
With your story, and the screencaps, it's like finding a long lost Gatch episode! This was so much fun to read.
Author's Response: Thanks, lborgia! I like the screencaps, too...it's fun looking for the right expressions...
Date: 07/16/2008 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 5
This is great! I can't wait until you post more along with the piccies that help tell the story. Way to go Springie.
Author's Response: Glad you liked it, Ebony! I tried to keep it short (LOL)...just wanted to try to get myself back into writing...but it's hard to break away from drawing! ;-)