[Report This]Date: 08/05/2010 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 1
Don't know why I hadn't read this before now, but I loved it. Very true to canon and I loved the way you wrote it from Tiny's POV. Everyone was in character, although Zark may have been a little... restrained. I half expected him to start waffling on about his FOSDIC but you spared us that. Was it to make him a more sympathetic character? Anyway, the Tin Toad had an heroic demise, and that was... really different. I'm going away to indulge in some Evil Laughter™ now.
[Report This]Date: 05/03/2008 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 1
First off, I love seeing this from Tiny's point of view, a fact I picked up right away. I also loved the line "We might as well have offered them tea and biscuits while we were about it."
Interesting to see him talking about the 'premonitions' of Mark, and then wondering about Jason. Then miffed because no one would listen to his. Considering no one listened to Mark, either, he shouldn't feel so bad. ;)
I also liked the way you describe the missile strikes. Was that from your imagination, or did you research that?
Yes, Zark is annoying, but he does have his good points. Writing him well does take a lot of focus, and nerves of steel (and perhaps the right combination of stimulants). At the end of this fic, I did feel sorry for him. Bye Zark, you did well.
A nitpick: It was Research Center that was destroyed, not Center Neptune, so unfortunately the little tin can would have survived. And yes, I do know that the "image' showed Center Neptune. ;) Continuity? What continuity?
Date: 03/22/2008 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 1
You actually had me feeling badly for Zark! This was written very true to form...their reactions were so "on point" for BOTP. Very well written, Cath!
Author's Response: Thanks everyone for commenting. Much appreciated - I consider making people feel sorry for Zark to be quite an achievement :)
Date: 03/10/2008 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 1
Catherine, given your distaste for Zark, I never would have guessed that you wrote this! I think it is a nice end for Zark and a very fitting one, too. And kudos for writing from Tiny's POV. It's nice to see the big man getting the attention he deserves! :)
[Report This]Date: 03/05/2008 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 1
This was my request, and I truly enjoyed the way you interpreted it! Having Zark blown up by Jason at the end of the series was all I could have asked for... and you made it seem so believeable! And that even took out the need for Princess to kiss Zark later... a scene that always made me want to gag!
Thanks for doing such a wonderful job with my request!
Date: 03/03/2008 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oh gosh, you made me almost, sort of, feel sorry for Zark, or at the very least, feel sorry for doomed Zark. I would not have thought that possible. Bravo!