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Reviewer: Chris White Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2012 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 2

Aw, poor Jason ... somehow it's worse that this time she didn't want to kill him ...

Author's Response: Yeah...this is a different side of Mala for sure...I can't quite imagine her showing that side in one of the episodes, though...everything in BOTP was so black and white...either you're a good character or a bad character...no in between! Guess that's par for the course in a kids' show.

Reviewer: kittenmommy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2011 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 2

Oh wow.  This was amazing!

Author's Response: Thanks! So glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: jublke Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 03/11/2008 12:07 PM Title: Chapter 1

Of all of the stories in the fanfiction challenge, Springie, I voted for yours as my favorite.  The descriptions of Lulo, the Lucky Strike Mine and its inhabitants, and Mala really stuck with me long after I finished reading the piece.  The last scene was particularly spectacular -- it's the kind of scene that I wish I could see as a movie.  I did wonder whether the team could really function without Jason for such a long time.  I guess Zoltar was too busy pestering Mala to wreak havoc anywhere else.  All in all, a good read!  :)    P.S.  And I guessed it was your piece after the scene with Princess and Mark and their newfound diamond ring!!  LOL!

Author's Response: Wow, thanks so much! It means alot to me that you enjoyed it! Yeah, I know this was Jason fic...but I can't help myself, I had to bring in my favorite couple for a little piece of the fic...I just knew I'd give myself away...*grin*

Reviewer: evangelina Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/07/2008 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 1

I think you did a wonderful job, Springie!  Sorry, I didn't mean it to be so difficult, but you apparently work well under pressure (hmmm, might that make you a diamond as well?).  It was clever the way you made Mala a good person forced to do bad things -- it makes her like so many of the Galactors Joe falls for.  I never would have thought of that.

I also liked the Condor wandering around in a wet towel.  Wait, did I just say that out loud?  ;-)

I would also like to say how lucky I am that I got the longest story out of the challenge.  Hee hee, I got one long enough to savor at length!!  (I read quickly.)

Cheers, kudos, and hugs!!!



Author's Response: Awww, Eva! I suspected this was your challenge! I have to admit, at first, I wasn't sure how I was going to make it happen. But once I got into it, I had alot of fun. I definitely think we need a visual of the Condor in a wet towel, don't you? I'm so glad you liked it! *hugs*

Reviewer: TransmuteJun Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/05/2008 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 2

You had a really tough topic, and you took the ball and rtan with it! You actually made me think that it was possible that Jason and Mala could have had something going... and that's not an easy task! I think you did a terrific job on this one!

Author's Response: Thanks, TJ! *hugs* I'm glad it worked for you!

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