Date: 08/11/2008 6:12 PM Title: Graduation
Let's see...Jason...and then the green-eyed girl...I definitely smelled trouble, and my only question after that was whether the almost-Galaxy Girl would get out alive. It's funny, listening to her thoughts about ISO and G-Force, and knowing that they're laughing up there figurative sleeves at her.
Very well done.
Date: 01/13/2008 8:34 PM Title: Graduation
Excellent use of dramatic irony. I like the way you quietly introduce the team members and the reader can see that the would-be assassin is just getting in deeper and deeper, the further she goes. You took your prompt and ran with it. Nice job.