Date: 08/15/2010 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 1
I like this, Becky. Everyone's motives seem so clear - I like the way you pan between each character. However, I agree with TransmuteJun. More, please!
Author's Response: Hi Julie. I hadn't really come up with anything more on this. It's hard to imagine Jason having hurt feelings.
Date: 09/09/2008 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 1
I'm enjoying this, but it seems unfinished. Will there be more? I like the way Anderson ios questioning his priorities... they always seemed fuzzy to me.
Jason definitely has a point. Although, so does ANderson. ;-)
Author's Response: Hi Jun. This was kind of just a one shot from the comic. I didn't want to examine the relationship between Jason and Anderson too much this time.