Date: 11/15/2017 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 1
no le entendi I am sorry
Date: 06/18/2007 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 1
The first paragraph is the saddest I've read in the BotP universe. "You will look at the lump in the next bed over and look down at the eight feet of fine blue wool carpet that separate your beds and think that it seems to represent the smallest distance that the two of you can bear to have between you." That's just painful to think of Mark viewing Princess in those terms. But then again, you never actually said it was Princess, did you? Then again, who else could hear someone quietly breathing thirty feet away?
I could see Mark longing for brighter horizons, and you know what's even sadder? The fact that I, as the reader, am grieving what he's currently leaving behind more than he is.
Date: 06/18/2007 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 1
An evocative and intriguing glimpse in to what could be in a post-war BotP universe. Nicely done.