Reviews For A Mary Sue Story, Starring Cricket
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Reviewer: jublke Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/08/2011 12:53 PM Title: Chapter 1

Classic Mary Sue.  Well done!

Reviewer: Candi Gomez Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/21/2010 1:08 PM Title: Chapter 1

Owww, ow ow ow. ;p

Reviewer: Cricket Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/05/2007 11:06 AM Title: Chapter 1

Thanks! I enjoyed writing this one as much as others are enjoying reading it.

Reviewer: Julieann Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/04/2007 12:02 PM Title: Chapter 1

Oh man, truly horrifying. One classic Mary-Sue trait after another in quick succession. Glad I didn't eat just before reading. :D

Only things I can think of to make it worse would have been the perfect singing voice (although the recorder part showed the perfect music talent) and being Ken and Jun kid from the future (although being Nambu's kid is bad enough). I would say this was a rousing success as a response to a Mary-Sue challenge!



Author's Response: Thanks, Juliann. That was a fun one to write. And she's actually Ken and Jun's grandkid. Nambu is their time-traveling kid.

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