Reviews For That First Step
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Reviewer: Julieann Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/12/2007 11:04 AM Title: Chapter 1

I had to go look up what a fox slide was as I hadn't heard that term before. Learned something new! :)

Nice imagery in this piece, and I like how you've portrayed Don. In the series you get the feeling there is some arrogance about him.



Author's Response: There is undoubtedly an American term for the flying fox and it was remiss of me not to do the research. I really should find out about that. Thanks, Julie :)

Reviewer: Ebonyswanne Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2007 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 1

You always think of the Condor as fearless...but this is a good insight into his more human side at a young age. Thank you for sharing a wonderful story!

Author's Response: Thanks, Ebony. Reviews are always appreciated.

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