Reviews For A Strange New World
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Reviewer: Jennieb Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2014 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 1

Lyssa, I'm so excited to see the new chapters! I can't wait to see where you take this. I love how you've introduced Zoltar and Mala to the mix. Of course Princess and Mark would end up at Mala's husband's family house! Please, please dust off them chapters girl! I have to know how they get the heck off the planet with my most favorite support character.....Yanni (:

Author's Response: I'm not going to give anything away as I'm currently working on chapter 11, but I will say this, you might not get your wish any time soon and when you do, it might not be quite what you expected. Confused? Good, so am I and I'm writing this story. Mark's not behaving himself, acting more like Jason which isn't in the script. I hope you enjoy. New chapter coming soon.

Reviewer: FireEagle Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/23/2014 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 1

Please more, I really like all the character interplay going on in your story. I can't wait to see how this comes out.


Author's Response: Thank you for the review. My interest in this story has been renewed due to the interest. I have several chapters which I intend to publish over the coming months. Oh, by the way, if you think there's character interplay going on now, just wait. This one might be an epic or broken down into smaller "books". Lyssa

Reviewer: tamorris Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/20/2014 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 6

I REALLY want to read the end of the story!!!

Author's Response: I've written at least another three chapters. I'll have to dust them off and publish them here. Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: Jennieb Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/28/2013 7:51 AM Title: Chapter 5

Lyssa, I must say you've put a very interesting spin on what we discussed during flux fields. I think the very strict social rules seem to fit well with what spectran society might be. I think the importance of women who can bear children also makes sense as they have been at war so long and with so many different planets that the population would have had to taken a hit so to speak. I like the idea of yanni trying to get off spectra because of the intolerance the people have toward his sexuality. It sadly correlates with society today. I am looking forward to seeing where you take this. I hope yanni makes it to terra and finds his own happiness.

Author's Response: Jennieb, I want to thank you for being the first to review. This is my initial gambit into a real story. I wanted to create a world in three dimensions and have Mark and Princess in the middle of something they just don't understand. I wanted Spectra to seem real and have reasons for the way we see the almost robotic goons. Yanni actually started out as side character but, as you will see, turns into a major player. I hate inequality and injustice. I see both in Spectran society and yet it's very ridged rules give equal amounts of freedom and frustration. I mostly want to thank you for the initial idea which came from an e-mail. Once the idea took hold, I am unable to complete anything else until this story is told. Once again thank you for making my muse fly.

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