Date: 12/12/2013 9:55 AM Title: Precipitation
I have to admit, I'm a little confused by the ending. What happened with the implants? How did they know it was Princess? I think I'm missing something.
Regardless, you certainly paint an erotic picture. I could feel the sexual frustration of the guys, and you painted each one of them individually, showing their unique personalities.
Author's Response: Hi Jun - not quite finished yet. I'm considering which way to go. Someone did suggest team orgy. (Oops, did I repeat that!). Truth I'm not sure what way Princess with take the discovery that her dreams aren't exactly private.