Date: 04/30/2017 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 1
Its a good take on the mixed lives they lead and Jun and Joes ideas on relationships. Its the first Condor/Swan break up I've read abd thats refreshing. Usually Eagle/Swan break ups are common in fics and Joe is the good guy she gets together with. Though in this he is good for his daughter. I think he needs help too.
I found it believable. Jun would have years of therapy.
Date: 08/18/2012 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow, Jun sure made a mess of her own life, didn't she? It's sad that she won't take responsibility for it, or try to make the best of things. I'm glad Joe is exercising his paternal rights (and as a father, he ahs rights) and doing what's best for him and for Sarah.
Author's Response: I've been writing this with British law in mind, where Joe wouldn't automatically have any rights, just a financial responsibility to his child. He would have to apply to court to be granted parental responsibility, which would be granted without question though. Glad you liked it though, thanks for sticking with the series. :D
Date: 07/29/2012 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 1
OMGGGGGGGGG Ièm sad how things ended up between Joe and Jun :( :( :( :( Is this the final episode of the series? ; x ; ; x ;hope it continues :( :( :( :(
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and posting a review. I'm sorry, but yes it is the last I'm writing for this series. If you would like to read more, check out "House of Cards" by K2P2. She is writing for the same series but from Ken's POV.
Date: 07/27/2012 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 1
After doing a beta it's always fun to read the final result. :) I like how it's turned out, with Joe knowing the full truth, and Nambu getting the sock in the jaw this version of him truly deserves! Alas, this Jun needs serious help. :)
Author's Response: Lol, thanks Chris... I've often wondered for how long this version of Joe wanted to give Nambu a sock in the jaw like that, :P I would like to think, if K2 picks up the story from here, that she'll see Jun getting the help she needs.