Reviews For G-Force: The Reality Show
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Reviewer: Becky Rock Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/27/2012 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 1

Very interesting, Dei. But I did find it a little hard to follow at times because I coudn't tell who was talking.

Author's Response: I realised afterwards that the way I posted it stripped a lot of the identifiers, particularly from the chat session from heck -- that'll teach me not to reread after posting!  Now fixed, thankfully. :) 

Reviewer: jublke Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/27/2012 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 1

Dei, I enjoyed reading this on the mailer.  I especially found effective what was left unsaid during those recorded conversations.  Are you going to post the second half?  This story appears to be completed, but I know it's not.

Author's Response: OMG... so it *is*  incomplete!  I need to stop doing this sort of thing. #^.^#  Thank you so kindly for telling me.  You'll be pleased to know that it's now complete!   And thank you for the kind words. 

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