Date: 07/11/2012 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 1
I hope the younger readers don't miss the moral of the story: Females always mature faster than males.
I loved it, EW! Cavies reminded me of ewoks a bit -- cuddly and huggly.
There's only one thing to add: Meep!
Author's Response: LOL! It's hard not to add "...and sometimes the males NEVER mature"! Anyway, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 07/06/2012 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 1
EE I love this!. I do hope there is more. The cavies soud so cute. Good thing Jason didn't dispose of the Spectran troublemaker in front of everyone.
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it! I don't have any immediate plans for more, but who knows? More could come later on...
Date: 07/06/2012 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 1
I could totally visualize the cavies. :) And it's always nice when Keyop's vocal tics become a strength. Mark should be very relieved you decided not to marry him off!
Author's Response: I thought Keyop had it coming. And as for Mark...well, the marriage might have looked impressive on paper at first (marrying into an ambassador's family), I figured there were just too many awkward bits to explain ("We got engaged when she was two weeks old!") And, of course, Princess probably wouldn't have been too thrilled...
Date: 07/06/2012 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 1
Awww, what a cute story, I really enjoyed it and yes, I agree there should be some for younger readers!
About time we saw Keyop being shown a bit of respect too, that's something we don't see too often.
Author's Response: Glad you liked it! It's a shame more opportunities aren't given for the little guy to shine -- he does fight at the same level as his teammates, after all!