Reviews For N'Explique Jamais
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Reviewer: Becky Rock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/03/2012 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 1

I seem to remember reading this before. I enjoyed it then and did now. It's hard to write what's going on in someone's head when they're grieving.

Reviewer: Julieann Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/03/2012 10:59 AM Title: Chapter 1

Yay, a new story! I liked how it explores a little bit of the aftermath of the events with Lucy. :)

Reviewer: Chris White Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 07/01/2012 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 1

I enjoyed this, but found it a little confusing trying to track who was saying and doing what. I'd love to see more around the water talking to Jason, like seeing how long that's been going on and what else has been talking to him.

I was definitely left wondering if Jason still planned to shove Mark off the cliff! But that's a loose end that works. :) 



Author's Response: Thanks a lot. :)  I'd tried reformatting it to clarify who said what with formatting differences, but evidently  that was less than successful.  I'll be fixing that. 

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