[Report This]Date: 07/23/2012 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 1
Ken and Joe are famous! I can totally see Ken as a movie hero and Joe fit the soap opera world perfectly. That deep voice and all the drama! Wonderful, wonderful story!
Author's Response: I had a really hard time imagining Ken as a soap opera hunk. :) Somehow Joe with his Sicilian charm seemed to work better for that role. :)
[Report This]Date: 04/02/2012 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 1
I'm still cracking up about Ken the 'ation' star and Joe the 'soap opera' star. That was fun.
Author's Response: Not sure what Joe did for Jinpei to dream him as a soap opera star, but it's gonna take a while before he lives that one down. :)
Date: 04/02/2012 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great idea! Really creepy in places, and I love that they're called Ace and Dirk :)
Author's Response: As I agonized over character names, it suddenly hit me that those were perfectly cheesy. :)
[Report This]Date: 04/02/2012 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 1
enjoyed this very much, I kept wondering how he seemed to remember his 'former' life, if it never existed in the first place! Of course I should have guessed nothing is ever quite as it seems.
Author's Response: It was April 1 and I was feeling tricksy. :)
[Report This]Date: 04/01/2012 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 1
Very fun what-if. If things had gone just a little bit different. I like how you built up that Jinpei wasn't really there, that he was seeing it all as a ghost. There were subtle clues at the start, and then it built up.
Nice!
Author's Response: Thanks. :)