Date: 02/21/2011 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 1
So beautiful! Ken seemed to be very attentive to her during that episode! I would've loved to have seen this moment in the series! Great writing, Ebony!
Author's Response: Me to Springie! :)




[Report This]Date: 02/19/2011 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 1
Again ... so much sentiment in such a few words ... "words" that we really have wished to hear being spoken out in canon! If only Ken, or even Jun, could have had the chance! Thanks so much for writing them down for us in such an expressive way!
Author's Response: One of those dreamy moments, thats what this series is about.




[Report This]Date: 02/17/2011 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 1
Such a sweet and sad moment... I love the way Ken is expressing his feelings, yet Jun is too distraught to 'notice'... quite the reversal of the usual scenario!
Author's Response: I hoped it left you wondering if she noticed or if her grief blinded her to moment he actually tried to show her, I'm enjoying writing this series.
Date: 02/17/2011 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 1
You wrote a nice description showing Ken's feeling during the Koji episode and how they continue even after the mission is completed.
Author's Response: Thanks CD. :)




[Report This]Date: 02/17/2011 11:37 AM Title: Chapter 1
Oh! A nice way to start my day... i love this pairing, so thank you for giving us this moment...
Author's Response: Thank you, I love writing about my favourite characters.



[Report This]Date: 02/17/2011 10:59 AM Title: Chapter 1
I really liked the last few lines. So much insight in such a short piece.
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your kind words. I'm trying to do short stories like this to improve, so thats how the series started.
