Date: 05/11/2011 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 1
This reads *exactly* like a BotP episode! Love it! :)
Author's Response: That was my intention. I'm glad it worked for you!
Date: 12/01/2010 10:00 AM Title: Chapter 1
This is the best BOTP adaptation ever ... you've abided by the rules, but you've managed to give us a more refined episode than is usually expected! You've also done a wonderful job with the screenshots ... the addition of the Christmas tree is brilliant, and I love the story of the mistletoe! You've made me chuckle! Great conversations between Zark, Susan, and Rover ... though suiting the characters, there's nothing intolerable!
Author's Response: Well if you can tolerate Zark, Susan and Rover, I guess that's a compliment, LOL! Yeah, the Christmas tree was fun... I figured we'd have to add *something* festive to the scene!
Date: 12/01/2010 6:49 AM Title: Chapter 1
I would have made the mistake of trying to work in the rich kids' nastiness, so that the boys would have reason to be all vengeful and superhero-y.
If BotP had been into seasonal episodes, this could have been it.
You do know that 'Okra' is a type of food (popular in the American South), and did you intend to name the villain 'Dander'? I kept thinking of 'dandruff.'
Author's Response:
Definitely! I chose all of the BOTP names (except for the boys) so that they could be something silly, but still not entirely 'Earth-like'... at least from an American/Canadian kid's viewpoint. ;-) Those names would have been exotic to me when I was growing up and watching BOTP, but silly enough to perhaps get a chuckle out of the adults.
Vengeful? On BOTP? No... they don't go together... *grin*