Date: 04/04/2013 1:00 AM Title: After the Rain
Wow...excellent writing...very powerful. I read this a long time ago and never forgot it. The rest of the team handled Princess' situation perfectly. Very believable...I'm glad that jerk got what was coming to him!
Date: 06/18/2007 12:18 AM Title: After the Rain
I really enjoyed reading this story.
The flow of it was beautiful, and you conveyed the emotions that she was going through at trying to hide what had happened from the team and wanting to get revenge at the same time.
The reactions of the team was not over bearing, or took anything away from the story. They reacted in the way I would have thought.
It worked well for me and I'd love to read more of your stories.