[Report This]Date: 04/13/2010 9:31 AM Title: Chapter 1
Lovely, Maddy! You so know how to make special the instant in which Mark and Princess declare their love to each other and find the divine pleasure in their first kiss and newly found intimacy! When and where is not important!
You letting Anderson (who could also be Nambu) accept their relationship in that way is all us other's wish ... at least, I can say that it's surely mine! Thank you for depicting him this way, not only in this fic, but even in others of yours! I so wish I could have seen something like this in canon!
Author's Response: I'm pleased you enjoyed it Marie. I reckon that Anderson is a very practical man and in canon this is born out by him often having a spit, but then moving quickly on. He can't undo what's happened so may as well just wear it!
[Report This]Date: 04/11/2010 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oh, this was lovely! This was definitely one of those moments where I could imagine Mark and Princess "getting closer" (the other one is when they were on Ghost Island together).
And I can imagine Chief Anderson being resigned to them being in a relationship. However, it is hard for me to imagine him letting them sleep together. (Maybe due to influences from my own upbringing...LOL).
Great story, Maddy!
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it - as for the Ghost Island episode - if that's not them using the mission as a cover for a little alone time, I'll eat my hat!! As for Anderson - my take on that is he realises who he's dealing with (i.e. the Eagle) and decided that he may as well accept it.
[Report This]Date: 04/11/2010 11:16 AM Title: Chapter 1
My favorite part, was only a brief mention. I love the idea of the Condor's (any Condor, Jason or Joe) reputation being exaggerated for whatever reason.
Author's Response: And Mark dispelled it with such sly glee...
Date: 04/11/2010 10:52 AM Title: Chapter 1
This is very nice Maddy. It is nice to see Anderson admit his "children" have grown up.
Author's Response: Thanks. I think, in a way, during the series both Nambu and Anderson won't admit that their experiences have made them more adult than their years.
[Report This]Date: 04/11/2010 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 1
Ooohhhhhhhhh....
I just love Anderson's reaction....
*sniff* dammit.
Author's Response: I somehow thought it would work better with Anderson being very matter of fact.