Date: 01/12/2010 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love that you're going back to the same story and making it come out another way! That shows a lot of creativity and talent as a writer,Did you ever consider authoring those Choose Your Own Adventure books? LOL...
Seriously, this story works well and stands on its own. You did a great job!
Author's Response: Choose Your Own Adventure? LOL! (Wild Roses nearly became one ;)). Or I could take a Japanese anime, cut out the violence, change the names of the characters, mess with their personalities a little, add my own animation (won't match, but who is really gonna notice, right?), add a couple of annoying robots, change the locations and at least half the premise.... Bwah haaa haaaa. I'm glad that you think the story works well - my beta reader had her work cut out! She did a great job of making sure it was consistant and the holes got plugged. ;) Thanks, again, TJ!